Read + Write + Report
Home | Start a blog | About Orble | FAQ | Sites | Writers | Advertise | My Orble | Login

Poems - by Orbler

Poems - August 2008

Where Shall we Go? by Vernon Scannell

August 24th 2008 06:57
Where Shall We Go?
by Vernon Scannell

vernon scannell poet
Vernon Scannell


Waiting for her in the usual bar
He finds she's late again.
Impatience frets at him,
But not the fearful, half-sweet pain he knew
So long ago.

That cherished perturbation is replaced
By styptic irritation
And, under that, a cold
Dark current of dejection moves
That this is so.

There was a time when all her failings were
Delights he marvelled at:
It seemed her clumsiness,
Forgetfulness and wild non-sequiturs
Could never grow

Wearisome, nor would he ever tire
Of doting on those small
Blemishes that proved
Her beauty as the blackbird's gloss affirms
The bridal snow.

The clock above the bar records her theft
Of time he cannot spare;
Then suddenly she's here.
He stands to welcome and accuse her with
A grey 'Hello'.

And sees, for one sly instant, in her eyes
His own aggrieved dislike
Wince back at him before
Her smile draws blinds. 'Sorry I'm late,' she says.
'Where shall we go?'

Review in Poem by Dexter

The risk of love, the gamble of desire,
Insecurity fuels declining confidence.
Questioned affection, riddled in the mind,
Exaggerated and over exposed.

Love that’s new, an unfamiliar union with potential,
The loyal heart interrogated by nanoseconds.
The yearning wait, a dominant desire,
A tragedy of the soul begins.

As quickly as it started, neutered when fulfilled,
Forgotten emotions submerge, pleasure comes.
Why does faith need to be defined or defiled?

70
Vote
Shared on


   
Subscribe to this blog 


Just this blog This blog and DailyOrble (recommended)

   

   

   



   

Add A Comment

To create a fully formatted comment please click here.


CLICK HERE TO LOGIN | CLICK HERE TO REGISTER

Name or Orble Tag
Home Page (optional)
Comments
Bold Italic Underline Strikethrough Separator Left Center Right Separator Quote Insert Link Insert Email
Notify me of replies
Notify extra people about this comment
Is this a private comment?
List the Email Addresses or Orble Tags of the people you would like to be notified about this comment


One per line max of 30

List the Email Addresses or Orble Tags of the people you would like to be notified about this private comment thread. Only the people in this list will be able to see or reply to your comment.


One per line max of 30

Your Name
(for the email going out to the above list, it can be different to your Orble Tag)
Your Email Address
(optional)
(required for reply notification)
Submit
More Posts
4 Posts
5 Posts
10 Posts
243 Posts dating from April 2006
Email Subscription
Receive e-mail notifications of new posts on this blog:
0

Orbler's Blogs

208 Vote(s)
0 Comment(s)
6 Post(s)
41465 Vote(s)
2797 Comment(s)
571 Post(s)
0 Vote(s)
0 Comment(s)
0 Post(s)
4319 Vote(s)
30 Comment(s)
61 Post(s)
Moderated by Orbler
Copyright © 2006 2007 2008 On Topic Media PTY LTD. All Rights Reserved. Design by Vimu.com.
On Topic Media ZPages: Sydney |  Melbourne |  Brisbane |  London |  Birmingham |  Leeds     [ Advertise ] [ Contact Us ] [ Privacy Policy ]