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Poems - July 2007

The Silver Stream

July 26th 2007 23:35
Slowly,silently,now the moon
Walks the night in her silver shoon;
This way, and that, she peers, and sees,
Silver fruit upon silver trees;
One by one the casements catch
Her beams beneath the silvery thatch;
Couched in his kennel, like a log,
With paws of silver sleeps the dog;
From their shadowy cote the white breasts peep
Of doves in a silver-feathered sleep;
A harvest mouse goes scampering by,
With silver claws, and silver eye;
And moveless fish in the water gleam,
By silver reeds in a silver stream.

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Comment by Nickoftime's Sanity Corner

July 27th 2007 00:57
Vimal,

I liked the imagery you used here...kind of made me think of a fantasy artwork picture I saw the other day...

It was very high tech, lots of silver...

Keep up the good work...

Take care,

Nick

Comment by vimal 1

July 27th 2007 02:34
Thanks Nick...

Its an effort to personify the moon ...

Comment by Anonymous

August 30th 2007 21:20
i like your peom it was really nice i think im ganna make a peom like that one of these days.....

Comment by A girl

October 3rd 2007 13:39
This is wonderful..i just started writing poetry to get my feelings out because im at a rough part of life and this is a great poem...i wish i could write like you. keep writing you have a natural talent

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